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While in work, the general plot, some principal charatcers and major monsters are formed. Think Mecha shows (Evangelion, G-Gundam, Big-O, Eureka 7) blended with Ultraman & Kamen Rider Kabuto. Give your suggestions.
This story takes place in the year 2045, 16 years after the famed, "Event" where a mysterious meteor crashed and devstated the city of Tokyo. A race of mysterious beings called Primevaliens emerge from the ruins of Tokyo & launch a series of attacks on the city of Neo-Tokyo. The only defense against these creatures is the secret agency. Enter Noa who by accident is one of three children chosen to defend the planet from these unknown threats, pilot of the Ashuram.
Noa Ryugouji, 15: The Japanese pilot of the Ashuram Unit 01. He lived in America before the story began. To this point, Noa's life has been very strained. He is a relatively quiet, introverted, self-conscious boy who doesn't tend to converse much with others. Driven the will to protect, his instincts can kick in, and he becomes like a berserker. His parents are members of ARK, though they disappeared during the first attack.
-Design: Shinji, EVA
Unit-01, the Zeraph.
The Ashuram with supreme attack and defense ability, Zeraph is suit for close-range combat. But once the Restaints are removed and a Barrier is formed, ''Unleased'' Zeraph can enter ''Hermes Phase'' to be equal to the monster and deal the most damage. Its ultimate attack is "Life and Death", where it's right hand is encased in heat. Zeraph restaints a Primevalien with the left arm while using the right arm to rip the Core of it. This attack required extreme stress and rage on Noa's part. But Zeraph has been known to act independently without either a pilot or without any apparent power source. Red is Zeraph's symbolic color.
Catherine, 15: Noa's childhood friend, characterized by her Stawberry Blonde hair and equally fiery temper. She's overbearing and even physically violent at times, due to the mood swings.
Unit-02, the Ophane
Lee Wong, 16: The genius son of the Wong Clan, ideal pilot of Ashuram Unit 03. He and his brother were sent to space by their father to learn the Xaolin martial arts so they could return as canidates in the Ashuram program. At first, Lee seems very overconfident and did not want to have anything to do with fighting. But a event changed Lee's ideals and thus became arrogant and prideful. But once he's in a fight, no one can deny his warrior's heart. He is a loner, driven by a warrior's pride.
-Design: Wufei Chang, Gundam-W
Unit-03, the Kheribos
The most result Ashuram built specifically for combat. Combining the efficient construction of Zerph with Ophane's weapon' systems, Kherbios is a walking tank designed to counter the Primevalien threat and a master of martial arts combat in "Unleashed" mode. Green is Kheribos' symbolic color
Supereme Commander <>, 35: The mysterious head of Neo ARK.
Commander Mitsuo Raiga, 30: The youngest in his position, he oversees the NeoTokyo Branch of the ARK Forces. A gentleman-type who was friends with Noa's father. He was with intelligence, with a somewhat arrogant notion of the world as a stage.
-Design: Roger Smith, Big-O
Miki Nyaka, 23: She's 2nd in command of the Japan branch under Raiga. Dispite being very immature for a woman jut in here twenties, she's serious in once in her uniform.
Link Falcone, 35: From the American Branch, he can be seen an incredibly laid back member with a disregard for the rules. His idea on life is to "never look back and keep going".
-Design: Straight Cougar, S-Cry-Ed
Usako, 25: Head of the the science branch.
-Design: "Growup" ChibiUsa (Sailor Moon Super-S)
Xandra, 25: From the America Branch. She is somewhat cold-hearted girl, a trauma from her past caused her to be more of a loner and closed to the world and to the people around her. An independent and strong leader. Her goal is to be strong, so strong that no one or nothing could ever hurt or harm her. She RARELY smiles.
-Design: Meia, Vandread
Hiroki, 15: In the same class as Noa, Hiroki's a street smart tough kid. A divorced child, Hiroki has a fierce devotion to his friends and family particularly his little sister who was hopitalilzed prior to the series due by a Ashuram.
Ken, 15: Hiroki's "sidekick".
Mishio, 15: A female classmate whom Nao has feelings for.
Mayumi, 15: A bookworm girl and one of Mishio's friends.
Lee Shen, 19: Lee Wong's older brother.
???????, 15: A mysterious boy of English/French descent, his shy and honest nature allowed him to form a friendship with Nao. He's one of the reserve Ashuram pilots when either of the others are unable to.
Yui Ichijou, 15: The original pilot of Ashuram Unit 1, but was mortally injured in a "accident" prior to Ashuram's first battle. A intelligent extroverted girl, though socially inept and unaware of everyday social conventions and perfroming simple tasks. However, she can seem distant and awkward to other people - she has trouble communicating with other humans and understanding their feelings, causing alot of at times. She tends to appear randomly next to people, startling them at times. Initially, she tends to be constantly fatigued and depressed, due to the fact she. Her back features two large mysterious scars over her shoulderblades, giving the impression that she had "angel wings" which were cut off.
- Design: Raven of Teen Titans. But with silvery-bluish white hair.
Primevalien: A general term for an Enity of unknown origin, they assume human form by mimicing. Once in this true forms, they can asborb other materials to build physical forms. A Primevalien has a self-shielding ability and, if damaged, can repair itself quickly. These characteristics make them impossible to defeat by conventional weaponry. To completely destroy therse beasts, the core must be extracted and shattered. Without the core, the body self-destructs, causing fierce blast. They are titled as "Unknown Lifeform-#"
"Mother": The 1st Primevalien identified.
-Design: Mother Melzard/Mother D-Reaper fusion
"Envoy": A multi-faced enity who intends to revive Mother. His existence ia not known yet, thus is "numbleress".
- Design: Fusion of Alpha-Q(TF:E) & Koh(Avatar)
UE-02, Junk-Primevalien: The 1st to attack the city of NeoTokyo years after the event. It asborbed scrapmetal, various garbage, & a liner used for a class field trip to build its form before it NeoTokyo & procede to devastate it at it's liesure. The Anicent seems fairly equipped for close combat. It was first opponent Noa faces in the debut of Ashuram Unit 1...
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